Welcome to Newgrounds!
It's a good start, and hopefully you can safely say that your flash submissions can ONLY get better from here! Keep up the good work, and always practice!
Welcome to Newgrounds!
It's a good start, and hopefully you can safely say that your flash submissions can ONLY get better from here! Keep up the good work, and always practice!
RedHarvest's was quite literally the best one.
There were a few skits with okay animation, but I didn't even chuckle until it got to RedHarvests...I laughed out loud with his skit.
The other one's just really fell flat in the humor department.
Lol
I voted high just because I lol'd about the concept...much needed insightful explanation in the author's comments made it passable for me.
And c'mon, Newgrounds was literally raised on controversial flash submissions...this is rather tame in contrast.
-A small preloader would be a wise investment, despite it's size.
-Also, regarding size, for something this short of a loop, it shouldn't be that large in MB; Go to File/Publish Settings and fiddle with the compression a little, and always set audio to "stream" instead of "start"
-In the near future, I would invest in a better microphone. It was very fuzzy, probably a headset mic (I had the same problem XD)
-Also be careful not to puff into the microphone.
That's my review! Keep it up, and I pass-voted it for making me lol.
BADASS!
How did you get the camera to waver like it was falling, but looking horizontally?
Everything was amazing...the only constructive criticism I can provide is to:
-acquire a female voice actor for the reporter
-make it longer
Really, ridiculously badass and funny...I can never figure out how to manipulate the "camera man" in a flash...a response would be so appreciated, it hurts.
hey thanks. and it isnt really that complicated. what i do is to merge everything down into one graphic, then move the whole graphic from side to side, then mark all keyframes in the timeslider, go down into properties, click on the timing button (i think it just says edit, or something) but click on all the buttons till you reach the one with a curve inside -> then click the little dot in lower left corner, drag the "tangent" down till the bottom and to the right. with the upper right dot, click it, drag tangent up till edge and to the left. that should give you exactly what i got.
However it is limited in many ways, and doesnt really work as well as other animation applications i think.
thanks. good luck.
Ha! So true...
The Melting Pot analogy was pretty accurate...even though the US is still incredibly young for a country...so there's really no telling what else America will start.
I like the custom Hulk theme + "Livin' La Vida Loca" piano tune...and I especially loved the Veritech on the kid's shirt, being a huge fan of the Macross series myself. (They're making a Robotech movie next year! :O)
The voice acting was spot on throughout, appropriate sound effects, awesome music, and the animation was excellently done. The typical anime sequence in the beginning was unexpected, random, and as well done as it was, didn't diminish YOUR style of animation afterwards in contrast. Sam Deats and yourself should pat yourselves on the back.
The only part that probably could've looked better was the blood splatter on Lady Liberty while she was cooking.
That doesn't change the fact that this was a brilliant flash. Fived, and Faved, keep up the great work!
P.S. ...How do you know J. Schuh from Dallas?
America.
Fuck Yeah.
Fived and Faved for much needed Patriotism and Truth.
/salutes
/Resalute.
Lol, aww...
First, hat's are off to the voice cast; they both did a tremendously good job.
Secondly, you immediately get huge points for doing something original; we need diversity in this community that's supposed to emphasize on creativity.
This was a really well-done cartoon! It deserves a much higher score than it's already received! (By the time this review was written, 4.07 / 5.00) The character's were well designed, and appealing to the eye with their distinct, contrasting colors.
There's no gore, no cursing; finally something on NG that's family safe. But it's whacky enough that it can be enjoyed by anyone with a sense of humor.
It was smoothly animated, and it demonstrates great cartooning ability on your behalf because you can carry on humor through the body language of the characters along, which is a feat not often seen in the independent community here. I smiled, and laughed out loud several times over visual details, odd facial expressions, Lil' Hoots eyes twisting around it's completely stationary head and body...the whole flash was fun!
I'd love to see more from you. At this rate of improvement in skill that you're demonstrating, I wouldn't be surprised to see you go pro in the near future.
Fived and Faved <4.11 / 5.00 (+ 0.0060)>
Keep up the great work!
I'm going to pretend this wasn't your first flash.
...and it's still nothing short of amazing. Holy shit, that was incredible...absolutely murders my first animation.
You are incredibly skilled...never stop animating, never get discouraged...within no time, I could easily see you rising among the greats of Newgrounds and beyond...you have your own unique style, that looks brilliant, which has some tongue-in-cheek dark humor...just how I personally like it!
Can't wait to see what else you got for us. Keep it up!
Clever Girl...
Nearly four years later, I still get a kick out of this. You did a damn good job spoofing parodies of other things, meshed into one. Well-done!
This never gets old.
Beyond a shadow of a doubt, the most well made sprite fight animation on Newgrounds. It was well written, the dialogue got to the point, and the fights were choreographed amazingly.
What I also liked about this one, particularly compared with MK vs. SF 1, was significantly less bullet-time...it ruins the pace of the fight, and this fight remained rapid throughout.
Keep up the good work!
-This is Phobotech!-
I've done animatics for Cyanide & Happiness, Purgatony, and WWE Storytime! I'm also a voice actor that's performed roles in One Piece, Gundam: Witch from Mercury, & Smite!
Check out my sci-fi novel, Umbra's Legion on Amazon Kindle!
Age 37, Male
Voice Actor/Animator
Collin College
Denver, CO
Joined on 9/22/03