Galneda's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic vs Knux fan flash]

Not bad.

I thought the pace was way too slow through most of it, but you kept with traditional graphics and music (I love the Sonic 1 music)

But yeah...just make it faster, and try switching up the camera angles from the far-away perspective...most of the backgrounds remained stationary.

Other than that, how did you get the text to appear as if under an invisible spot-light? I haven't figured that out.

Keep up the good work!

[Operation Neptune: Part 1]

I remember your first Madness WWII Flash.

This is THREE TIMES better than that. Great work!

Sound effects switched it up throughout, and the background music was never overbearing or too quiet; it was just right.

Anatomically, the Madness characters themselves remained consistent. The only inconsistency is when the Private is looking around the corner, and at one moment the church was there by itself, and the next moment, the German soldiers seemed to just appear.

You switched up the camera-angles well, there were no "Nazi-Posters" like in the last one, but there was nice ambient grafitti. The background noises and planes flying in the background were an excellent touch.

All in all this was a very well-thought-out Madness WWII flash.

But, I'm also going to leave you with constructive criticism.

1. I love that you opted for the voice acting route. If I were to criticize the voices (which were very well recorded) I would only advise you to voice ACT:
They're in a war-zone, in the middle of the fighting, they would be trying to shout over the all-but-deafening war noises. Sneaking around, the private would whisper what he saw around the corner. Throughout the flash, it generally seemed to be at the same tone. For example, the one line I thought was the least acted was "Well, the war is over for him."
2. The Enemy AI. If three soldiers are firing at a soldier, trying to flush him out from behind a corner, and a grenade landed at his feet, I would expect some kind of reaction other than sit there and take it. Even if they genuinely were unaware of their empending doom, that should've been better established.

Cannot, repeat, CAN NOT wait to see what you got next. If your rate of improvement continues at this rate, I wouldn't be surprised to see your next flash on the front page.

As for this one, Voting 5. Great job!

[Little Aviator]

Heartwarming.

Crisp, well done animation with great lip syncing to superb voice-acting. Written and structured beautifully; this easily could've been the beginning of a professionally animated movie.

This gets my vote for the Christmas contest, because it doesn't drown itself in the corporate, whored-out Coca Cola Christmasy bullshit. This is a Christmas flash about family, giving, and imagination.

Loved it. Voted 5. Favorited.

Merry Christmas!

KartuneHustla responds:

Man, thanks for the awesome review. And a very Merry Christmas to you too

[Final Fight:the Nerd Saga]

Ahahaha!

Best short on Metal Gear Funnies, I like how you added more content and touched up a few things for the stand-alone animation.

Snake's dialogue is what cracked me up the most, I think. What I love about this style is how epic everything is made out to be paired with how incredibly ridiculous all of it is. That is what I want to accomplish; a balance in awesomeness and humor.

Voted 5! Keep up the good work!

[The iPhone Shuffle]

ROFLMAO

This was great! Sadly, it's probably not too far from the truth too! Both of you did a great job, Voted 5!

[Cannibal.]

Compress...Your Audio!

It was entertaining, yes, but Holy shit that load-time...I could tell it was the audio because of how high-quality it sounded. You gotta compress that shit, man.

Other than that, superb voice acting! I always lol at that Star Trek fight, and all-in-all, great job! Voted 5!

[MGF~Director's Cut]

That's incredible.

I looked and I can't look away. :3

All my 5 R belong 2 Snake...and the clown that does the amazing thing!

DAIRYDOG responds:

look at my dick!!!

[Madness Day 2008]

Whaaa?

What the fuck was that thing from the top-right button?

Anyway, great going!

[Fallen Angel Ep. 1 (Pt3)]

Holy Shit.

This is the most brilliant cinematography I have ever seen animated into flash form. Fucking genius, epic, and gorgeous.

Hats off. Amazing job!