Galneda's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gta2 The Introducction Video]

You didn't make this.

BendyPro12 responds:

i know, but i din´t say: hey i made this, i put that the game was by rockstar, y never put the credits for me

[Germans in my house]

Rember.

Oh yes, I rember.

[Do you remember this?]

The only thing breaking it up from the still frame happens so fast that it's difficult to read what even happened.

I read the message. Take a break. Find your "why" again. I mean, the why you gravitated towards animation in the first place.

There's masterpieces you haven't seen yet. Study them, and dive into the making-of's, and get curious again.

Two things that helped me out a lot were live model sketching and reading Richard William's Animator's Survival Kit, which is a pdf you can find in its entirety for free if you search for it.

Don't play to the crowd- "Those who try to please everyone, please no one." You do the thing that you're really gassed up about, and the people that vibe with that will gravitate towards you.

My inbox is open, feel free to PM me at any time. I'd feel happy to help.

[Hazardous deal]

Why redraw the letters that have already been written? Just keyframe and add to the keyframe.

Siuuubrod responds:

Thank you for your advice I’m new to animating

[slash]

That's a really complex movement, and you pulled it off nicely. Well done! One of the more successful tests I've seen on the portal.

[Ihatemylifebet Lore: P]

Beep beep, it's a Jeep!

Love the animation on P

[Ihatemylifebet Lore: N]

Oh man, Nyan Cat's a throwback I didn't expect. What's gonna happen next!?

SuperGibaLogan responds:

no way its galneda

[Baby Soldiers]

This'd be right at home in a plot point of Xavier: Renegade Angel.

The plot is ridiculous and I loved the logic behind it. The animation was perfectly executed to drive the punchline home. If you guys ever need a voice actor, I would love to collab with yall!

CompunctionTime responds:

Lol, mannn, that is the 2nd time someone said Xavier: Renegade Angel. This whole time I was wondering what genre I was in. Having you as a voice actor would be fun, "it's just me btw". Collabs, I'm always down for those. (creating something out of our imaginations is what its all about imo).

[Teaser]

The first 13 seconds are a film reel countdown element that was dragged and dropped onto the timeline. The ending 10 seconds is a black screen. What's left is a title crawl, with a title that isn't reflected in the submission's name (This submission isn't called "Wednesday Fornication Teaser" it's just called "Teaser") and what we're left with of actual footage that all of this is building up to is six seconds.

Six seconds with an inexplicable cut on a character standing there not reacting to this other character that's wigging out for no perceivable reason.

That's not telling us anything. Typically, a Teaser is generating hype and spreading the word about a project that's still in development. As if to tell the audience, "Hey, here's a taste! If you want more, check this out or be here at this time" We got none of that. No links, no date, no relevant information as to what to expect in your project.

You gotta put in a little more work if you want folks to get onboard with whatever you're putting down. Saying nothing in the author's comments, and just tagging this as "Action" ain't enough.

[Wobble Trouble|Synthfetaru X me-me]

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