Galneda's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Boo Princess Haunt]

The cropping is frustrating because I feel like we're zoomed into a fraction of a much larger piece, but what we can see here is gorgeous and awesome.

[Your path ahead]

That ZOOM THO. Holy shit, this is magnificent.

["There is nothing beyond this place"]

Dude, I bet this guy could DEMOLISH some ice cream.

[Sith Rosie]

She looks bored. I thought the sith were supposed to be the passionate side that weaponizes emotions.

Her body rocks, I love that mid-driff- those abs of hers steal the show. There's something up with the pushed up region of her titties in the upper right of the frame, in between the top corner of her tits and the stage-right shoulder that doesn't quite seem right, and I don't know how to articulate what needs to happen to correct it, but the only anatomy issue I can see is right in that triangle between titty, shoulder, and neck.

The outfit, while hot, makes less sense the longer you look at it...which is fine, I'll suspend disbelief. The lightsaber is kinda phoned in, but the lighting effects on her skin and black clothing truly make up for it. Her hair looks great, her face is hard and stern. Sliced and diced Bowser seems like a last-minute addition, but I think it was a wise decision to defuse him out a little bit with a red glow so he doesn't detract the focus. Dual lighting setup on this thing is marvelous. Great job! Keep up the great work.

Parsujera responds:

Ooohh first of all, thank you so much for the feedback! I don't think I ever got an feedback so good like yours before haha

I know the area you're talking about, it's definitely looking weird haha I prob had some struggle on that part when sketching it

For the outfit I got darth talon as ref so it's really something whatever just show as much skin as possible haha

The colors are prob my favourite part in this one :) And yeah he was a last minute addition haha I felt like there was something missing in the BG while working on her.

I think I definitely could've worked better on her clothes textures but I really like this pic overall, I'm satisfied with the result :)

Also, I'll take the emotion stuff in consideration in the next time I draw some sith related stuff as well :) I really forgot about it :(

Thx again!

[Valkyrie Claire]

What is going on with her stage-right leg? It doesn't read as "proficient in several ancient martial arts" it reads like her knee is horribly broken, but she's choosing to walk on it like a zombie. It is wildly distracting just because it's so unnatural looking.

The details on the fur of her boots and cloth draped around her pants are my favorite detail, I love the shine of the leather and metal on her boots, and even the fabric of her pants look great. The anatomy of her abs doesn't look right, and shirts don't perfectly tuck underneath the contour of the breasts like that while maintaining their shape.

If she's wearing a cropped tank top, is the fur around her neck attached to that shirt, or is that a seperate collar she wraps around her shoulders, like a travel pillow? Also I just noticed the three-way strap around her diaphragm- is that attached to a tiny backpack? How is that functional? What could its purpose possibly be?

Come to think of it, is she dressed for cold weather or not?

Her face looks good, I like her hair, the metal hands make less sense the longer you look at them, but I'm sure it's fine. The entire pose just kinda lead to these metal hands that are just "out and away from the body?" But not making a fist or anything, they're just...what is she doing? Is she in mid-sentence? Is she beckoning someone to come closer so she can super-grab 'em?

All in good fun, this looks good. Keep up the great work!

kikino77 responds:

Thank you for the thorough critique!

[D&D - Priyanka Sen; The Wizard of Transmutation]

She is such a damn cutie, more please!

[Muffet]

Cutie! I love her winky eyelashed eye, and the detail on the monstrosity up top is great. That fabric quality is stunning, every ruffle, all that lighting detail on it...Wow! Well done!

[Thanksgiving Chainsaw Massacre]

Damn, that's an OTC chainsaw, so you know it's good!

[One thing he's never seen]

You've really been on fire lately! Keep up the great work, I love your style and attention to detail!

Sony-Shock responds:

Aaah!! Thank you very very much! I'm going to keep trying my hardest! >v< *flexing emoji*