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She is extremely adorable and I am compelled to protect her at all costs. I love her color palette too!

Wonderful sense of motion, great silhouette on both of them, charming and successful color palette, and a good proportional scope of environmental backgrounds used.

As much emphasis on shading and lighting that's used on both of the characters, including underlighting Scorbunny with the flame as a lightsource, the only details that are distracting to me are her hat and her mouth. The hat looks kind of gelatinous and shiny, which isn't bad- the effects used are great, I'm just not sure if it applies to the fabric that hat is supposed to be. And the inside of her mouth is one solid color, which only stands out because of the contrast of the amazing attention to detail on lighting and shadows everywhere else.

I understand these could be stylistic choices though, so that's not deductive in any way that I'm voting, because I love the piece. It's cute, and I love the motion in the poses. It gives off a really cheerful vibe, and it's got an optimistic and charming warmth to it that's deserving of high praise.

I fucking love it. Hydraulic abs meet hydraulic...ads. lol

Your passion for Murphy is palpable and evident, and the original designs are amazing. I've been following your teaser posts on Facebook, and I hope that seeing this done and officially submitted lubricates your engine to pick up that momentum again and keep rolling. You got a great style and I want to see more of your ideas made manifest!

-GG-

MindChamber responds:

Awww thanks dude.. love ya man

Forreal tho

Dripping with style, print posters, stickers, and shirts you damned talented fool.

It's pretty extreme for an idle animation. Looks like he's saying "Nyahoo" repeatedly- I agree with the review below observing its like he's being surprised over and over again. Heavy breathing for an idle animation is great, but this guy looks like he's announciating something with a lip-sync- it doesn't read as a breathing loop.

Additionally, with the size of the gun and the position he's holding it in, even if we were looking at him flatly from the side, the barrel is dipping too far below his feet. This would work in an isometric view where you have a plane above and below the character, but we can see contradictory information- the camera is aligned with his head, we can see that his ears are at even height with each other. That's not isometric alignment, that's just a character on a flat, side-scrolling plane. My point is: moving forward you should clarify and commit to the decision whether or not this character is being viewed slightly isometrically, if the gun could be smaller, or could he be holding the gun in a different way so it's not clipping through the ground he's standing on?

The animation is great, especially on the head and face. Fabric wrinkles look fine, his knife-arm elbow is accentuating how wildly exaggerated his motion is, and the forward heel lifting and lowering over and over again seems more distracting than beneficial to the movement you're trying to sell here.

I look forward to seeing what you have next! Keep up the great work, reach out and take it.

FsebastiamL responds:

Thank you for your review, i am still working on this animation and i gonna correct all points you said, i did not notice things like the gun's perspective and the awkward about so much movement in idle animation :)

I'm in love, and I want to see her in action! Can't wait for Reject Force, go go go for it!

Gorgeous and Complete. There's nothing constructive I could say that would improve this piece. Wonderful job!

Helluvan entrance! Welcome! She looks great, and I'm looking forward to see what you do next!

STOP MAKING HER SAD, YOU MONSTER

Furboz responds:

B, b, but... I love her!

-This is Phobotech!-
I've done animatics for Cyanide & Happiness, Purgatony, and WWE Storytime! I'm also a voice actor that's performed roles in One Piece, Gundam: Witch from Mercury, & Smite!
Check out my sci-fi novel, Umbra's Legion on Amazon Kindle!

Geoff Galneda @Galneda

Age 37, Male

Voice Actor/Animator

Collin College

Denver, CO

Joined on 9/22/03

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