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[Once upon a Time...]

Dripping with style, print posters, stickers, and shirts you damned talented fool.

[Tonight we hunt Han animation]

It's pretty extreme for an idle animation. Looks like he's saying "Nyahoo" repeatedly- I agree with the review below observing its like he's being surprised over and over again. Heavy breathing for an idle animation is great, but this guy looks like he's announciating something with a lip-sync- it doesn't read as a breathing loop.

Additionally, with the size of the gun and the position he's holding it in, even if we were looking at him flatly from the side, the barrel is dipping too far below his feet. This would work in an isometric view where you have a plane above and below the character, but we can see contradictory information- the camera is aligned with his head, we can see that his ears are at even height with each other. That's not isometric alignment, that's just a character on a flat, side-scrolling plane. My point is: moving forward you should clarify and commit to the decision whether or not this character is being viewed slightly isometrically, if the gun could be smaller, or could he be holding the gun in a different way so it's not clipping through the ground he's standing on?

The animation is great, especially on the head and face. Fabric wrinkles look fine, his knife-arm elbow is accentuating how wildly exaggerated his motion is, and the forward heel lifting and lowering over and over again seems more distracting than beneficial to the movement you're trying to sell here.

I look forward to seeing what you have next! Keep up the great work, reach out and take it.

FsebastiamL responds:

Thank you for your review, i am still working on this animation and i gonna correct all points you said, i did not notice things like the gun's perspective and the awkward about so much movement in idle animation :)

[a bunch of Chaser]

I'm in love, and I want to see her in action! Can't wait for Reject Force, go go go for it!

[Decay]

Gorgeous and Complete. There's nothing constructive I could say that would improve this piece. Wonderful job!

[Summertime Effie]

Helluvan entrance! Welcome! She looks great, and I'm looking forward to see what you do next!

[Ditched Teri]

STOP MAKING HER SAD, YOU MONSTER

Furboz responds:

B, b, but... I love her!

[Boo Princess Haunt]

The cropping is frustrating because I feel like we're zoomed into a fraction of a much larger piece, but what we can see here is gorgeous and awesome.

[Your path ahead]

That ZOOM THO. Holy shit, this is magnificent.

["There is nothing beyond this place"]

Dude, I bet this guy could DEMOLISH some ice cream.

[Sith Rosie]

She looks bored. I thought the sith were supposed to be the passionate side that weaponizes emotions.

Her body rocks, I love that mid-driff- those abs of hers steal the show. There's something up with the pushed up region of her titties in the upper right of the frame, in between the top corner of her tits and the stage-right shoulder that doesn't quite seem right, and I don't know how to articulate what needs to happen to correct it, but the only anatomy issue I can see is right in that triangle between titty, shoulder, and neck.

The outfit, while hot, makes less sense the longer you look at it...which is fine, I'll suspend disbelief. The lightsaber is kinda phoned in, but the lighting effects on her skin and black clothing truly make up for it. Her hair looks great, her face is hard and stern. Sliced and diced Bowser seems like a last-minute addition, but I think it was a wise decision to defuse him out a little bit with a red glow so he doesn't detract the focus. Dual lighting setup on this thing is marvelous. Great job! Keep up the great work.

Parsujera responds:

Ooohh first of all, thank you so much for the feedback! I don't think I ever got an feedback so good like yours before haha

I know the area you're talking about, it's definitely looking weird haha I prob had some struggle on that part when sketching it

For the outfit I got darth talon as ref so it's really something whatever just show as much skin as possible haha

The colors are prob my favourite part in this one :) And yeah he was a last minute addition haha I felt like there was something missing in the BG while working on her.

I think I definitely could've worked better on her clothes textures but I really like this pic overall, I'm satisfied with the result :)

Also, I'll take the emotion stuff in consideration in the next time I draw some sith related stuff as well :) I really forgot about it :(

Thx again!