Impressive!
I thoroughly enjoyed this track, this is professional grade! Keep 'em coming!
Impressive!
I thoroughly enjoyed this track, this is professional grade! Keep 'em coming!
I clicked the sig...
...and I like the results! You don't have to have sex with me anyday, SBB! This was worth it! You did a really good job on this!
Simple and Sweet...
It starts simple and sweet, giving us a taste here, a taste there, all of it quite enjoyable...then it picks up around the 43 second mark, in a way it almost surprised me. I enjoyed this even further, but the only thing that kept it from getting a higher score, was of course, the out-of-tune clarinet...other than that, a very cultured, broad, yet delicate song that I enjoyed thoroughly...You got any more treats you're holding back on us? Lol
Couldn't have chosen a more appropriate title.
I'll elaborate why;
This piece starts whirling and twirling in the beginning, like a gust of the wind guiding leaves down a path, it goes from nature, to a more civilized nature around the 23 second mark, to me it almost struck me as two seperate, but twin-songs playing together...it begins it's transition at the 51 second mark and when it blossoms at the 1:00 mark...it has turned into something extraordinary...I can think of many, MANY diverse imagery to flow with this song, but upon it's "Trying to be something" it's found itself as a seperate entity of it's own...You could say, it's efforts were successful.
Your first Audio Submission, eh? Astounding.
It shifts and moves as it progresses, and it's beautifully mixed just like a good song ought to...You got some musical talent behind you dude, I gotta say. I really like this piece, dude...it would be a damn shame if this is all you submit; Give us more! Voted 5.
Not #4 of all time material, but decent.
In my personal opinion it was overly poppy in the way how the synth's and beat "bounced" ...the echo-effect on the main tune of the Battle Network theme also seemed to dull the impact of the actual melody; in other words the echo was a bit much. Like I said before, it's a decent piece of work, but not worthy of it's fame in my opinion. I voted averagely.
Absolutely wonderful...Majestic and beautiful,
Good lord, I've really underestimated the APortal; I haven't been touched by music like this, like, actually signed and produced music through time, in YEARS...The vocal performance was wonderful, both man and woman, the production of the value is crisp and absolutely stunning...
*sigh*...I love it...Seriously...you inspire me.
The Audio Portal has truly transformed into a fantastic Nexus of creativity...this piece is a gem that outshines and glimmers among most...but from the transition of when the Audio Portal first started, I look back on it today from a distance, and I'm pleased that there is such a constellation of gems out here today. You sir help this Audio Portal sparkle with the greatest of your creative efforts, and it motivates me to meet you at eye-level in talent.
Truly a master-to-be, at a mere age of 19...with a skill so broad at an age so young, you should be unfathomably successful.
Wish I could vote infinitely, but 5, 5, 5! Bravo!
-Phobotech-
Hahaha... HEY!... you do know that I did all the vocals for this song... so there is no "Woman" per say in this piece. Lol... this confirms my suspicion that I indeed sound like a woman... DAMNIT!... oh well as long as you guys like it.
I agree, there is so much amazing talent on Newgrounds now... that they should just shift the focus away from Flash and shine more spotlight this way. It seems everyone wants to be the best... but you know... I think we should stop competing and start collaborating. We've made this place so amazing thus far... lets all work towards a bigger and better newgrounds.
A mere age of 19? *looks at your profile* HEY!... your 20... lol you old guy you!
Thanks for all the compliments and the great review. I take my bow.
MMD
Imaginatevely Stimulating!
Good God! I'm going to start drawing right now! This piece is masterfully crafted, It's a damn shame this game kinda went down, but hey, something good came out of it, methinks.
Great job, man! Voting 5!
I love drawing, though I'm nowhere near a level to be proud of, I used to draw a great deal before writing music. I think in some way that helps create songs that invoke imagery. It is a shame, the game held huge potential, with more content, and changes, it could still be a great game.
Live and learn, it is still a game I won't forget anytime soon. Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
Funky! I like it!
+ Undeniably Newgrounds Material...
+ Bass! Bass! and more Bass!
+ Frunky trump and bouncy beat!
+ Very flexibly flash-worthy
- Needed more change around the 1:40 mark...you got a mild case of "Repetitionitus"...
- I thought it personally needed more vocal work, y'know...or at least...just something MORE...when the riff first breaks out around the 16 second mark, I was jamming for a good minute or so, and then it started to get a wee-bit repetitive at the 1:40 mark like I said above.
All in all, great to hear something down and funky again! Newgrounds Trademark included, this was a great piece, and I enjoyed it at first...you just gotta switch it up every once and a while, man, that is ALL.
Looking on at the rest of your work...oh yeah, and voting 5!
-Phobotech-
Yeah i get too lazy and never really try to hard to change things up...
Maybe when i get a break from school i'll have more time and more focus! :D
Thanks so much man! You are awsome!
Very metallic!
The ONLY thing it needed was a little switching up; By the 4th time the riff cycled through, a new sound or switch up from the tempo or existing sound should've been inserted....Don't get me wrong, it sounds COOL AS FUCK! Very industrial, I can easily base this off a fight of some sort...it just needs to hop-about from the initial loop...in the self-titled flash you made it was far too short, so I HAD to check out the Audio file, to find it's actually too long, considering the content.
The scream you had in there? Wasn't girly at all...but appropriate for it...in fact, I thought it actually sounded pretty cool. FUCK what other people think, you need to like yourself!
All-in-all, badass loop! It just needs variety to spice it up! This is the first audio submission I've heard from you, so now I'm going to check out the rest of your stuff.
-This is Phobotech!-
I've done animatics for Cyanide & Happiness, Purgatony, and WWE Storytime! I'm also a voice actor that's performed roles in One Piece, Gundam: Witch from Mercury, & Smite!
Check out my sci-fi novel, Umbra's Legion on Amazon Kindle!
Age 37, Male
Voice Actor/Animator
Collin College
Denver, CO
Joined on 9/22/03